In offices around the world,
writers spend time and energy disputing business writing
standards. One person says, “You can’t
start a sentence with but or and!”
Another responds, “But why not? And who says?”
If you are quarreling about such questions (if only with
yourself), take a break. Here are the answers to a variety
of troublesome frequently asked questions (FAQs).
Question 1. Is it acceptable
to end a sentence with a preposition?
Answer: Yes,
ending a sentence with a preposition is correct, but ending
a sentence without one sounds more formal. Choose the
tone that is suitable for your situation.
Examples ending with a
preposition:
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That is something we had not thought
of.
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Where is this catalog from?
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Type the name you want to search for.
Examples with a more formal
tone:
- That is something we had not considered.
- Which company produces this catalog?
- Type the name for which you want
to search.
Question 2. Is it acceptable
to start a sentence with and or but?
Answer: It
is perfectly acceptable to begin a sentence with and
or but. However, other words sound more formal.
If formality is your goal, choose formal language.
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But / And we still hope to sign a
contract.
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However, / In addition, we still hope
to sign a contract.
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Nevertheless, / Furthermore, we still
hope to sign a contract.
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3. Isn’t it unacceptable to start a sentence with
the word because?
Answer: It is fine to start a sentence with
because.
Writing teachers often
forbid students from starting sentences with because
in order to teach them to avoid sentence fragments like
the one below.
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4. Should one space or two come after a colon and after
end punctuation such as a period?
Answer: Just one space comes after a colon and
after end punctuation. However, in rare situations where
one space seems too small (for example, with italic type),
it is wise to insert an additional space.
Question 5. Is it clumsy to begin a sentence with “There
is” or “There are”?
Answer: There are many fine reasons to begin a
sentence with these words, and this sentence is an example.
Although people who majored in journalism have been taught
to cut right to the true subject and verb, at times “there
is” and “there are” fit perfectly. Each
of these sentences has its place:
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There is an interview scheduled at
3 p.m.
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An interview will take place at 3
p.m.
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An interview has been scheduled at
3 p.m.
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6. Is it bad form to begin a message “I am writing
to”? Isn’t it obvious?
Answer: It isn’t bad form. Although sometimes
“I am writing to” is unnecessary baggage,
at other times it allows us to ease into the subject:
Here is a place to drop
the expression:
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7. Is it wrong to use I and we in the same message?
It seems inconsistent.
Answer: While it may be confusing to use I
and we in the same sentence, it is fine to include
both pronouns in one message, even in the same paragraph.
Examples:
When you are speaking for
yourself, use I. When you speak for the team
or the company, use we.
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8. Is it true that one should never start a sentence with
I?
Answer: Not true! It is perfectly acceptable
to start a sentence with I. However, as with
all good writing, it is inelegant to start sentence after
sentence with the same word.
In much scientific writing, personal pronouns (I,
we, they, you, etc.) are avoided. Check the style
guide used by your editor or readers.
Question 9. Is it okay to have a paragraph with just one
sentence?
Answer: Yes, despite the common three-sentence
requirements of composition teachers, one-sentence paragraphs
are effective in business writing. In fact, they are the
best choice for action items and other content that must
stand out.
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10. Do I have to begin a business letter with “Dear”?
Answer: Yes. If you use a person’s name
or title in a greeting, you must use “Dear”
before it. As a letter opener, “Dear” is not
an expression of affection; it’s a business custom.
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Dear Mr. Cho:
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Dear Carrie:
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Dear Hiring Manager:
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11. Do I have to use “Dear” in email?
Answer: If you are sending email in place of
a formal business letter to someone outside your organization,
use the same greeting you would use in a business letter,
that is, “Dear.”
For messages within your company (and for friendly messages
to the outside world), address the reader politely in
the first sentence, like this:
Or use one of these ways,
with the message following beneath:
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Lee, Lee:
Hi, Lee.
Hello, Lee. Dear Lee,
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12. Are contractions acceptable?
Answer: Yes, it’s acceptable to use contractions
such as it’s, didn’t, and
don’t. However, they are considered slightly
informal, so avoid them in formal documents. And as with
any language choice, avoid choosing them constantly.
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13. What if my supervisor disagrees with these answers?
Answer: The goal in business writing is to communicate
with your reader. Your supervisor is one of your readers.
If he or she dislikes the word but as a sentence
opener, avoid using it. But why not bring out an excellent
reference manual, and try to do some supervisor development?
When questions arise, consult a current, respected style
manual. For recommendations, visit the Recommended
Books page.
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